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JebusAndTheHolyYoses

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Good melody

I really like the melody, however, this song is very short and the drums feel very uninspired. Shouldn't be too hard to build off of though and I could see this being pretty amazing.

Nice

Great chord progression, I love the sound of it. The percussion fits in perfectly, not so much that weird metallic pinging sound though. This needs to go somewhere, you need to build on it more. Great job though.

CrisisSound responds:

Will do.

Never heard the original

But I like this. Great job on it!

exotworking responds:

Thanks :)

Work on it

The piano is way out of tune, even without the other instruments, something is very wrong with it. Now I do think you have a good start to a song here, get the piano in tune and it will sound great. Now the part that starts before the 1:00 mark is kind of strange. It needs more work, more sound, it's empty right now. I'm really not trying to discourage you here, and all those things I mentioned can probably be fixed in about 2hours.

thompsontalker79 responds:

Thx for the review, I was gonna use a better piano, but FL Keys is all I had. Maybe after I get a better piano, I can retune the piano and make it sound better.

Nice beat

I really like how you gave this song a dark feel. The strings add nicely to the already dark and creepy atmosphere. The instruments all mix together well , and I can't really find anything wrong with it.

Nice job.

Druids-Warcry responds:

Hey man, I'm glad you liked this song! Yeah I was going for that feel of dark and mysterious, and the more I think about it I should have turn down them drums.

thanks for the review man.

Love the bass

Yeah, the bass is great, as are the drums. I really like this. I think the song gets a little overly saturated with too much noise at some points, but other than that I think this is excellent.

sergeantx responds:

Thank you so much. It really means a lot!

Cool

I never really got into Phantasy Star, but I've always been a fan of video game music. This is pretty damn cool! Overall I would say great job on this mix, the only suggestion I've got is to put emphasis on the drums, they seem too quite and not developed enough. Other than that, great work! 5/5

AdamNovagen responds:

Well, the drums were based on the original track, which had slightly understated percussion. Still, thanks for reviewing! :)

Nice

This has a nice, dark feel to it. I think it will work great for this game especially if it is supposed to have an epic yet dark undertone to it. The only complaint i have is the wispy sound could use less volume. Other than that, it sounds like a great start. Keep with it!

Great Song

Would go well in a video game.

Almost sounds like a song from Zelda.

Sephirot24 responds:

It'd be awesome if someone used this in a videogame :)
A Zelda feel? Maybe it's the harp..

Anyways, I'm glad you like it!
Thx for taking your time to review ^^

--SephXD--

This is really neat

I really like the feel to this song. All the instruments sound great and they give the song a very unique feel. I also like the piano.

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