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[The Evolving Stick Fight]

Good

Ok, this animation is good, but there is plenty of room for improvement. First off, either get a new mic and improve the voice acting, or just cut it out. I'm sorry, but it is cringe worthy. The animation on the other hand is very cool. While it may be simple, it works and looks quite cool. There's room for smoothing things up of course, smoother animations and stick figures would be great. I think you may also need some sound effects, it's kind of weird when you see the guy explode or boost up and it makes no noise. Other then that, you're set, good job.

Lord1Mauler responds:

Yea, I've been getting a lot of reviews saying that my voice sucked, but it was actually an experiment with gband. I can get Sound FX from gband too, but I didn't think about it. I didn't want the music to get in the way of the sound fx.

Thnx for the review.

[Interruptions]

Nice!

Very well done, especially for a first submission! It's funny, AND the animation was well done. Not often you see a "first" at this caliber. Great work.

9/10
5/5

[Pong Battle v0.1 -preview]

Cool

Not bad, especially for a first!
I really like the 3Dish effects you got going there! Well done, most first timers stick with simplistic 2D, way to go!
Im giving you a 5 because this is a great start, but like you said: music, sound effects, and better artwork are key!
I'm looking forward to the finished version, keep doing what you're doing!