Expand it!
The atmosphere is very dark and ambient. I like this, and it is well made. I also think that you could expand it and make it even better. What you have here is an excellent start and it makes for a great loop. It could, however make for a fantastic full length song. I can't find any faults with it other than the length, so great job!
Also, I like to review on a review for review basis, so if you could check out our newest song that would be great!
Heheh sure! There are some things that I might need to change just for this loop. But I might expand it and/or make other loops similar in the next few weeks. :)
Twisted is an understatement
The most horrifying collage of Beatle's noise known to man. Congrats?
Thanks. My job here is done!
Great mix
Imma give you a high rating although my opinion may be biased since I love the original, BUT this is a really good mix. This is a really interesting remix, and I think you did do a great job even with only using the original recordings. So overall this is very well done.
What I might suggest is if you get the chance, play with effects such as reverb, delay, stutter effect... anything really to get a new sound. Also try chopping the samples up and see what you can do with it. You can even add your own instrumentation. As a remixer, don't be afraid to try things. But that's just a suggestion. Even if nothing comes of that, at least you learn music in the mean time.
One more thing: If you have time I would appreciate it if you could listen to my newest song and lend me some advice/feedback/opinions.
Thanks!
Excellent
I really love the chord progression. The melodies are really deep and trance-y. I really like the instrumentation, and whatever effect you used on the piano and bass synth. The only thing that bothers me, and it bothers me quite a bit, is the drums. Not the pattern, but the samples you used. In my opinion, you should download a free drum vst with better samples than the one you are using. It would really add to your song.
Also, if you have a moment, I like to review for review, so please check out my new song and let me know what you think if you get a chance.
Thanks, and good luck!
Thank you for the review. I agree, I could of spent more time on the drum selection, but Im working with the demo version of FL Studio, so my options are limited to my mixing skills. Im happy you like the melodies tho. Thats mostly what I focused on this time.
Neat
I like it so far. I must say you get an A+ for originality. Keep the intro in my opinion. It is unique for one thing, and it also serves as a hook. Much like a literature hook draws the reader in, it draws the audience in to continue listening to the work.
I must say that this is really cool. Keep working on it. I look forward to hearing the final.
Also, if you have a moment, could you check out my new song? I am in need of some feedback.
Thanks, and keep up te good work!
Some of the better dance ive heard on NG
Very well done.
I must agree, basic trite chord progressions usually lead to bland and overdone music, but you seem to have gotten away with it hear xD. This is so well produced, I can't say I have any criticisms. A lot of it is reminiscent of Daft Punk, or at least that's what I'm hearing. In any case great work, I did enjoy the listen.
Also, if you don't mind, could you take a listen of my newest song, I need input from people who know what they're doing. Thanks!
word, brothuh! haha thanks. and thanks. and yeah i love daft punk, and i sampled much like they do, or as far as i know they do.
and sure dude, i'll go give your stuff a listen right now.
Minimalist
This doesn't seem to be ambient as much as minimalist, where notes are used sparingly and really only used to create an atmosphere. It's interesting, and it could go in the background to a movie or a game to create an eerie feeling. It is pretty neat though, maybe you could expand it.
Thanks and if you could review my newest song that would be great
Ambient was closest to atmospheric so I considered it so in NG terms.
It's meant for a period of rest in a video game. The strange thing about making this was that I kept wanting to move parts around, or eliminate some. I'm thinking it needs a lot more planning, but this is what I've been able to come up with today (like I said, I mostly uploaded it to test the reactions of how well each effect fits together).
I'll gladly review your newest song!
Room for improvement
Repetitiveness works in ambient music, but only when done right. It has to be the kind of loop that puts you in a trance like state, but still changes enough to keep the listener interested.
This needs work, first off try experimenting with these free VSTs
-DSK Oranze
-DSK Keys
-Taurus
-FL Studio's TS404, you need to change it more, and add reverb! Don't be afraid to experiment
-ME80, it's not free, but it can be found... around
Try those, experiment, find new ones for yourself.
Always mess with reverb when making an ambient song, always! Delay can't hurt either, just mess with them until they sound neat. Don't overdo it, but don't underdo it.
Anyway I like to review on a review for review basis, so it would be really cool if you could review our newest song. :)
Thanks and good luck
Lol, ok! sorry for late reaction! ill go check your song from 31 july XD
I always type that for sure because if i upload something without being aware that it might be repetitive, I get only reaction with: "Repetitive"...... so yeah
and thanks for tips!!
Calm
Very nice, tranquil song. Everything flows well, and the drums enhance it as they should. Great production, the piano sounds fantastic, if you don't mind me asking, what VSTs did you use?
Looking forward to more stuff by you, and if you don't mind could you check out some of my stuff?
Sytrus and Nexus, and sure I'll give your stuff a listen :D
Great
Very peaceful and calming, with frantic yet mood setting drums. I voted a 5, but I only gave 8 because I want you to make an entire song out of it.
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