JebusAndTheHolyYoses's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[I'm a Gangster]

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[_Nebula_]

Ambient..

This should definately be thrown under the "ambient" genre. I like it, however, the instruments you use seem to be FL Studio stock instruments maybe I'm wrong. If they are, I just want to give you some advice on a few very good and very free VSTs. First off, the drums are muffled, download the VST Dr. Fusion 2, it has about 1,000 samples inside it, all very high quality. It's fantastic. For a bass, download Taurus and Tb303, all of those are free. I like your ideas, the instruments are just a bit bleh. Keep it up!

[Ultimate Mix]

Nice

Nice chill techno song.

[trying to think of a title....]

Needs work

The last note of your piano loop is a bit flat. Also, I would recommend trying out new instruments, mess around with Dr. Fuzion for your drums, it's a great VST. Replace the annoying synth that comes in halfway through with something like DSK Oranze.

superuberinsaneausm responds:

i added the flat note 4 style, thanks for the vst recommendations ill check those out

[All Up in This Joint]

It's like a more vulgar

Flight of the Conchords.... 'nuff said.

[Recombination Theory]

Too experimental?

Well, I applaud you for trying stuff out, but there seems to be no song structure. It's random, all over the place, difficult to listen to, and it needs a strong lead instrument/melody. This seems like something someone would make to get the hang of effects and such then apply to a better structured song. Not saying it's bad, just needs structure.
6/10 3/5

Dj-PinkWalrus responds:

You know, I'm honestly not surprised by the response this song has received on this site. I think you guys would be surprised to see the amount of successful artists out there with music that's just as experimental, just as atonal, and with the same degree of song structure. Listen to some break core or gabber, at some point, and tell me what you think.

[Silence together]

Interesting

Neat song, not really industrial, industrial usually has more distortion, is darker, and just sounds industrial. However, what you have hear is great too! I really enjoyed the drums at around 1:40, good job on those alone. All and all, the melody is decent, it has a nice amount of experimentation, and I can't really take off for anything. So.... 9/10 5/5, feel free to check out some of our stuff ;)

Chozz responds:

Will check your stuff out. Thanks for the feedback, if you could PM what genre you would labe this as? Ive changed it to MISC at the moment.

[Giga La Nora]

Great start

The kind of music you are composing, well it takes actual musical knowledge. Each part is very complex, and it all fits together nicely, great job on this! Now, it can be filled out, add more instruments, more length, and more verses. Good job so far, 8/10 5/5 (I hate voting down)

sarias responds:

unfortunately it had to be this length we only had 30 measures to do this. I have actually considered lengthening a lot of my pieces for this class though. thanks for the review though i'm glad you liked it

[ILTG Breakcore Mix]

Very neat

Not a very big techno fan here, but I thought this song had a unique feel to it. The drums were complex, interesting, and always changing. The beginning feels kind of empty, and with how long it is this can be rather repetitive. Other than that, great job! 5/5 9/10

Genshiken responds:

Ok thanks for the response! Glad you liked the song. You've got some great music yourself.