JebusAndTheHolyYoses's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[7 A.B Dr0p]

Nice

In many ways this was really well done. I agree that the kick was very nice, very intense. I liked. Also, you did do a great job mixing everything. But to me the song did take too long to build up. In my opinion the first half of the song was rather bland. I think if it built up a little quicker it would be better. That's just my opinion. Because the second half of the song is more complex and more intricate and it has more than just one or two notes in the first half.

So overall this was very well done! It almost has a Daft Punk feel to it (all you need is some weird robotic vocals :P). The only problem I have with it is the first half. Other than that, great work!

Keep it up
7/10
4/5

Mans0n responds:

thanks for your advice i appreciate it

[Against happiness (demo)]

Nice

This is pretty neat! I liked it, this has a very nice mood to it. The piano and guitar sound very good and the percussion definitely adds to it. I have to agree that the piano should fade in a little faster at the beginning though. Also, the way everything cuts off at the end is kind of weird. But besides those very minor things, this was very well done.

This is a very good start! Keep working at it!
I would suggest adding something bassy to it. Not necessarily from the start but later on in it. But overall, very nice and I look forward to a completed version later! :D

5/5
9/10

[Flying Battery Redux]

Awesome Mix

I love sonic music...
This was a really good mix, I could tell what it was immediately, yet it was definitely a refined and completely different take on the song. Awesome beats, great bass, well done.

9/10
5/5

[Exfusion ~Hanorotu]

Cool

Im getting nice dark feelings from this... All I suggest is not using presets... Try downloading some VSTs (theres plenty of free ones), they are lots of fun and much better quality. Also, the drums need to change. They at least need to differ at points rather than being the same pattern throughout the song.

Overall this is a good song.
I gave you a 5/5 :)

hanorotu responds:

Thanks, I have been looking into some VST's. Hopefully I can find some that will meet my purposes.
Thanks again.

[Cyanide [Final]]

I like

This is pretty cool. Only have a few suggestions. First off at around 0:55 that string sounds like its off key to me. Also the song gets distorted at times, probably from too many instruments at once without equilizing.

Other than these minor issues, this song is really cool, especially the intro.
Well played.
9/10
5/5

acm3212002 responds:

Thanks for the 9 and the suggestions, I'll try to follow them next time!

[Twinkling of Hope]

Nice

I like it a lot. You have a lot of good things here! The intro is nice, and the build up throughout the middle of the song is great as well. The percussion is well done, as is the piano and bass. However I think there are a couple of things you could fix. First off, at 0:20, there is no transition. The song starts off dark sounding then the bass suddenly drops out and the piano is left with 8th notes. This sounds awkward. I would try adding a transition of some sort there. Also the song builds up for a long time then it just ends- I think the building up should lead to something more climactic, like another part of the song.

These are just my opinions.

Great job on the song overall, and keep up the good work!
7/10
4/5

PearlEssence responds:

Thank you so much for the review and I'm glad you liked it!
I'll definitely see if I can come up with a good transition for the beginning as well as maybe coming up with a more appropriate ending/climax if I can. Thanks for the input!

[MrAirick - Intense Action]

I do like it

Nice bass. I like the break down at 0:40. the quiet part really compliments the louder portions of the song. And you have some awesome drum breaks. Excellent work on those. Also the high pitched synth (the chime sounding thing) fits in there well. I really like!

Keep it up.
5/5
9/10

[Skela - Groovin' to]

Yes, yes it does

Nicely done! Awesome bass! Great drums! also nice intro. The synths sound great as well. This is probably the best dance song I've heard on NG, I would have to compare it to songs from Daft Punk and such, kinda has the same feel in my opinion. Just a couple of things bothered me- for one thing I couldn't hear the lyrics at all, I could just hear a voice barely... however I realize that this may just be a part of your style. Also, for a dance song it is very short. I would suggest expanding it.

Besides that, excellent work!
Keep it up!
9/10
5/5

Skela responds:

Yeah had some problems with getting a clear voice recorded.
Thanks for the review.

[[NN] A Fight On the Ice]

Nice

This is pretty cool. I like what you have so far, I wish it was longer. The only advice I've got is to expand this into a full song. After all you have a lot of awesome sounds, really good melodies, a great bass and nice drums. Keep working on this pleeease!!

Great work
9/10
5/5 :D